Mens Mud
May/110
Examination: 10 points for the best test?
A bolt of lighting the sky with a lite comparison. The rain fell like drops noiselessly. the color gray streak across the sky. Color pale pink horizon. -------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------ thick Drakes sorrounding oaks down. even the trunks are full of hollows. Bounders hits the ground with a thud. the grounds are muddy mixture. -------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------ Sounds shotguns heard from afar. mens control malfunction screaming. Dashing across the borders between. rains spread free hair. It's not a story. It's a freaking poem.
Lost by the third line. No action or story, just a bunch of description, then my mind started to go completely. Sorry.